Tuesday, June 27, 2006

जब गिराना ही था मुझे

जब गिराना ही था मुझे,
तो हाथ देकर क्यो उठाया?
हो नही सकता जो सच है,
क्यो मुझे सपना दिखाया?

सॉस रोकी किस लिये?
किस लिये चिराग तोड़े?
खेल सारा खत्म है अब,
टूटे दिल फिर, क्यो हैं जोड़े?

रौशनी मे भी तूने
घी के दीपक क्यो जलाये?
रात घनेरी थी जो पहले,
पुंज तिमरो मे मिलाये।

दौड़ती आँखो मे जगपति,
चैन वापस क्यो है आया?
मंज़िले थी ही नही तो,
दौड़ मे मुझको क्यो भगाया?

सुन ज़रा, बहरे खुदा
क्यो तूने मुझे ऐसा सताया?
जब हराना ही था मुझे तो,
खेल ऐसा क्यो खिलाया?

टूटती कश्ती को माझी
किस लिये दिया किनारा?
औरो को टक्कर दी मैंने,
पर, हाय मै अपने से हारा।

विद्रोह :-

गिर गया तो क्या हुआ!
मैं पुरुष, मैं आग हूँ।
मैं उठूंगा, मैं चलूंगा
आखिर, मैं तुम्हारा भाग हूँ।

-मनव

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

jise harna kahte ho tum
usme bhi teri jeet hai
bin lade kisko mila sun
jo ki kabhi manmeet hai
tu chala hai tu lada hai
har kya aur jeet kya
tu hai sach ab jo mile
kya matri aur preet kya
-shweta

Abhas said...

dear manish,
this comment comes for your three blogs taken together!

first the positive reviews for your poems..

remember the movie "black"!?
your first poem reminds me of the "teacher". whose last hope still lies to find a student who will wave to him in the right direction
for your second poem, it reminds me of a beautiful dialogue from the same movie..
"what matters is not the eyes, but what matters is the light"
i hope that you loose the eyes and be blessed with the light that you wish for!!
and as for the third.
yes off course you have that tinge of villainy that makes you lovable at times. you can break the thought process of a person, like you jsut did for me!!

and now for some negative, and rather refuting comments, don't mind them yaar ok.. and also if they don't make a perfect flow of thoughts right now, then it is because of your constant "abhas bhai, kuch funda do na.."

like you choose to be ever-laughing, i choose to be silent at times..
because i found an ever-loving partner for me in my silence..

you questioned God why he made you loose, i say He just gave me a break after I ran too hard with my silence. (line 6 and 7 of the poem below)
you visualize urself bounded with God, and want to be free from him, I visualize him as a part of me and that makes me realize that I am free yet still bonded with him!! (line 1-4)
you visualize urself as an important mistake of God, I visualize Him as my most inseperable and insignificant partner.. (line 8-10)

chup si is raftaar ke aalingan mein base tum kaun ho,
jeevan rath par paarth mere, tum hi mere maun ho!!
shaanth hai dhara sari, phir bhi tum ho bolte,
prem ki uchaayi sabhi, saath mere taulte!
brahmaand se pare kabhi saath mere bhaagte,
laut kar phir shaant bhu par, thakaan ki nisha hum yeh kaat-te!
in saare khelo mein priyajan tumhara,
phir bhi mere liye tum aur sabse gaun ho,
mere antarman ke sarvasva, tum hi mere maun ho!!